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Want to buy some electronic goods from nearby shop

Want to buy some electronic goods from nearby shop NBMd

Dear Sir, This letter is regard to enquire about some electronic goods which I needed. Your shop was recommended by my acquaintance. I have just rented an unfurnished apartment in the city center and your shop is the nearest one from my flat. I want to give it new-look to my home by adding some daily needed equipment. Well, I need a refrigerator, washing machine, vacuum cleaner, TV and sound box. Could you please mail me the price list of all these goods? I also want to buy sofa, bed and a book shelve for my dining room. Please let me known if all these items are available in your shop, if it is then how long can you hold these things for me and if not so can you able to order it for me. I also request you to please consider me for some discount as I am buying it in bulk. Looking forward to hearing. Yours Sincerely,

Dear Sir,

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Looking forward to hearing.

Yours Sincerely
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