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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come BjMw
Hi Mr Smith, I am Sumit Gupta. I have recently moved in flat number 102 adjacent to yours with my wife and little daughter. I am writing to inform you about the housewarming party we have shcedule for this Saturday at my house. The Party will start at 8 PM in night and will be continued till around 1 AM. It will be having awesome music system along side with delicious food items both Veg and Non Veg. As I am hoping around 25-30 guests to be come to attend the party so I am afraid the noise from the party may disturb you. So I am apologising for that in advance. It would be honour for me if you could also visit my house and attend the party along with your family. I didnt get a chance to stop by and meet you in person till now beacuse of my packed scheduled. So it will be a great opportunity for me to introduce myself to you while we enjoy the party. I look forward to seeing you soon. Yours Sincerely, Sumit Gupta
Hi Mr Smith,

I am
Sumit
Gupta. I have recently
moved
in flat number 102 adjacent to yours with my wife and
little
daughter.
I
am writing to inform you about the housewarming
party
we have
shcedule
for this Saturday at my
house
.

The
Party
will
start
at 8 PM in night and will
be continued
till around 1 AM. It will be having awesome music system
along side
with delicious food items both Veg and Non Veg. As I am hoping around 25-30 guests to be
come
to attend the
party
so
I am afraid the noise from the
party
may disturb you.
So
I am
apologising
for that in advance.

It would be
honour
for me if you could
also
visit my
house
and attend the
party
along with your family. I
didnt
get
a chance to
stop
by and
meet
you in person till
now
beacuse
of my packed scheduled.
So
it will be a great opportunity for me to introduce myself to you while we enjoy the party.

I look forward to seeing you
soon
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Sumit
Gupta
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IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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