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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.

Dear sir or Madam, I am writing to you to clarify my consern which is connected with my current roommate. First and foremost, we have been living together during three months, but could not have found the consent how to organize our schedule. She is not supposed to be a person who is inclined to studies. And that is a total opposite of my prior roommate. Secondly, acoording to my financial situation I have to combine work and studies. Due to that I need the complete rest in a pieceful place which is considered to be my room. The girl who shares the room with me is not at the same wavelength with me. She listens to the music after 11 p. m. and doesn't clean up regularly. Moreover, the fact which makes things worse, is that she invites her friends almost every evening. To sum up, I want to ask you to shift me to another room. I would prefer a private one because now I am not sure that I am ready to go out of my shell and meet a new rommate. Thank you for your attention. I'm waiting for your reply. Sincerely, Kseniia Mi.
Dear sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to clarify my consern which
is connected
with my
current
roommate.

First
and foremost, we have been living together during three months,
but
could not have found the consent how to organize our schedule. She is not supposed to be a person who
is inclined
to studies. And
that is
a total opposite of my prior roommate.

Secondly
, acoording to my financial situation I
have to
combine work and studies. Due to that I need the complete rest in a pieceful place which
is considered
to be my room. The girl who shares the room with me is not at the same wavelength with me. She listens to the music after 11 p. m. and doesn't clean up
regularly
.
Moreover
, the fact which
makes
things worse, is that she invites her friends almost every evening.

To sum up, I want to ask you to shift me to another room. I would prefer a private one
because
now
I am not sure that I am ready to go out of my shell and
meet
a new rommate.

Thank you for your attention.

I'm waiting for your reply.

Sincerely
, Kseniia Mi.
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IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
198 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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