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Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…

Dear smithI was so pleased to hear that you are planning to visit my country this year. Most people visit India but the best time is summers. you can visit the Shimla in the summertime because it is hilly area so you ca enjoy the weather and you can enjoy the beauty of mountains with colourful scenery and their unique traditions. it is very famous for tourism so you will not have any difficulty to find accommodation. there are two types of accommodations here which is very easily available. firstly, very famous and obvious hotels. there are 3 hotels which provide world class services moreover all these are 5 star hotels and secondly, Airbnb which is very common now everywhere in which you can cook according to your taste and you will fell like you are living in a house rather than hotel. moreover, I want to show you the old church where I always go and pray with my family and you want to always want to see and oldest rail museum because I have so many memories with it and I want to share all with you by showing the museum. looking forward to catching upbest wishes sim
Dear
smithI
was
so
pleased
to hear that you are planning to visit my country this year. Most
people
visit
India
but
the best time is summers.

you
can visit the
Shimla
in the
summertime
because
it is hilly area
so
you
ca
enjoy the
weather and
you can enjoy the beauty of mountains with
colourful
scenery and their unique traditions.
it
is
very
famous
for tourism
so
you will not have any difficulty to find accommodation.
there
are two types of accommodations here which is
very
easily
available.
firstly
,
very
famous
and obvious
hotels
.
there
are 3
hotels
which provide world
class
services
moreover
all these are
5 star
hotels
and
secondly
, Airbnb which is
very
common
now
everywhere in which you can cook according to your
taste and
you will
fell
like you are living in a
house
rather
than
hotel
.
moreover
, I
want
to
show
you the
old
church where I always go and pray with my
family and
you
want
to always
want
to
see
and oldest rail museum
because
I have
so
many
memories with it and I
want
to share all with you by showing the museum.

looking
forward to catching
upbest
wishes sim
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
199 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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