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Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…

Dear smithI was so pleased to hear that you are planning to visit my country this year. Most people visit India but the best time is summers. you can visit the Shimla in the summertime because it is hilly area so you ca enjoy the weather and you can enjoy the beauty of mountains with colourful scenery and their unique traditions. it is very famous for tourism so you will not have any difficulty to find accommodation. there are two types of accommodations here which is very easily available. firstly, very famous and obvious hotels. there are 3 hotels which provide world class services moreover all these are 5 star hotels and secondly, Airbnb which is very common now everywhere in which you can cook according to your taste and you will fell like you are living in a house rather than hotel. moreover, I want to show you the old church where I always go and pray with my family and you want to always want to see and oldest rail museum because I have so many memories with it and I want to share all with you by showing the museum. looking forward to catching upbest wishes sim
Dear
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pleased
to hear that you are planning to visit my country this year. Most
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people
visit
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India
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but
the best time is summers.

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you
can visit the
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Shimla
in the
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summertime
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because
it is hilly area
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so
you
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ca
enjoy the
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weather and
you can enjoy the beauty of mountains with
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colourful
scenery and their unique traditions.
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it
is
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very
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famous
for tourism
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so
you will not have any difficulty to find accommodation.
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there
are two types of accommodations here which is
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very
easily
available.
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firstly
,
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very
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famous
and obvious
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hotels
.
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there
are 3
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hotels
which provide world
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class
services
moreover
all these are
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5 star
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hotels
and
secondly
, Airbnb which is
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very
common
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now
everywhere in which you can cook according to your
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taste and
you will
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fell
like you are living in a
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house
rather
than
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hotel
.
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moreover
, I
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want
to
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show
you the
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old
church where I always go and pray with my
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family and
you
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want
to always
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want
to
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see
and oldest rail museum
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because
I have
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so
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many
memories with it and I
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want
to share all with you by showing the museum.

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looking
forward to catching
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upbest
wishes sim

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…

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3 paragraphs
199 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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