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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Swartz, I am Amulya, a student of Eric Johnson School, my student ID is 389339. I am writing to discuss about withdrawing my ongoing part-time VLSI course. This fall I got a 40 hours per week job at Infi and I was enrolled in evening course of Dr. Lin. However, I recently got to know as per immigration rules a student is not suppose to study and work full-time parallely. My work at Infi ehlps to gain more knowledge along with practical exposure and adds weightage to my profile. As a conequence, I am planning to pull back from cousework this semester. I went through the course catalog for 2021 summer and found that same couse is offered by same professor. I will be done with my Internship next spring and I can concentrate completely on my courses. I have submitted necessary application in galaxy portal, I kindly request you to accept my course drop out application and do the needful. Regards, Amulya

Dear Swartz,

I am Possible spelling mistake found.AmeliaAmuletAmaliaAmplyAMLAAmilia
Amulya
, a student of Eric Johnson School, my student ID is 389339. I am writing to Did you mean simply “discuss withdrawing”? You do not need the word “about” here.discuss withdrawing
discuss about withdrawing
 my ongoing part-time VLSI course.

This fall I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a 40 hours per week job at Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Infi, and
Infi and
 I was enrolled
 in evening You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 of Dr. Lin. However
, I recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 to know as per immigration This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 a student is not In this context, “supposed” is the correct verb form.supposed
suppose
 to study and work full-time Possible spelling mistake found.parallelparallelsparallelly
parallely
.

My work at Possible spelling mistake found.InfoInfINRIInfixIFIINEI
Infi
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ehlps
 to gain more knowledge along with practical exposure and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrues
adds
 weightage to my profile. As a Possible spelling mistake found.consequence
conequence
, I am planning to pull back from Possible spelling mistake found.courseworkhousework
cousework
 this semester.

I went through the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 catalog for 2021 summer and found that same Possible spelling mistake found.houseHousecausecoursemousecoupe
couse
is offered
 by same professor. I will be done
 with my Internship next
 spring and I can concentrate completely on my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
courses
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 have submitted necessary application in galaxy portal, I kindly request you to accept my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 drop out application and This expression is chiefly Indian English or dated British English. Consider an alternative that is more suited for an international audience.do what is necessarydo what is required
do the needful
.

Regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.AmeliaAmuletAmaliaAmplyAMLAAmilia
Amulya