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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear sir Today I am writing this letter to inform you that I cannot continue part-time testing course this semester. As you know I am working full time in the software development company from 9 to 5 and attend class from 5 to 8 because of my good reputation in the company my employer allowed me to leave 30 minutes before the end of my shift but now one of my colleague is not well and he is on sick leave for 1 month and I have a do half of his work too. According to the situation now my employer is not giving me half an hour exception to go early and this is the main reason that's why I cannot continue this course. I hope you understand my situation and refund my half fees as per the college policy. I will try to complete my course because it is important for my career in next year. I am looking forward to your positive response. yours sincerely sim

Dear sir

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
 I am writing this letter to inform you that I cannot continue

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Part-time
part-time
 testing course this semester.

As you know I am working full time in the software development This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 from 9 to 5 and attend This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 from 5 to 8 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 reputation in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 my employer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 30 minutes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of my shift This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 one of my colleague is not Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).well, and
well and
 he is on sick This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 for 1 month and I have After ‘a’, do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of ‘do’ is correct. If ‘do’ is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
a do
 half of his work too. According to the situation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 my employer is not giving me half an hour exception to go early and this is the main reason that's why I cannot continue this course.

I hope you understand my situation and refund my half fees as per the college policy. I will try to complete my course This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for my career in next
 year.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 am looking forward to your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Yours
yours
sincerely


sim