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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear sir Today I am writing this letter to inform you that I cannot continue part-time testing course this semester. As you know I am working full time in the software development company from 9 to 5 and attend class from 5 to 8 because of my good reputation in the company my employer allowed me to leave 30 minutes before the end of my shift but now one of my colleague is not well and he is on sick leave for 1 month and I have a do half of his work too. According to the situation now my employer is not giving me half an hour exception to go early and this is the main reason that's why I cannot continue this course. I hope you understand my situation and refund my half fees as per the college policy. I will try to complete my course because it is important for my career in next year. I am looking forward to your positive response. yours sincerely sim
Dear sir

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Today
I am writing this letter to inform you that I cannot continue

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part-time
testing course this semester.

As you know I am working full time in the software development
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company
from 9 to 5 and attend
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class
from 5 to 8
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because
of my
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good
reputation in the
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company
my employer
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allowed
me to
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leave
30 minutes
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before
the
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end
of my shift
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but
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now
one of my colleague is not
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well and
he is on sick
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leave
for 1 month and I have
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a do
half of his work too. According to the situation
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now
my employer is not giving me half an hour exception to go early and this is the main reason that's why I cannot continue this course.

I hope you understand my situation and refund my half fees as per the college policy. I will try to complete my course
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because
it is
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important
for my career in
next
year.

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I
am looking forward to your
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positive
response.

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yours
sincerely


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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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