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Sales issue and resolving matter.

Sales issue and resolving matter. wlJn

Dear Jenny: I am contacting you in regards of the past events. We should get together for further analysis and development of the matter, if you want, we can set up an appointment to your earliest convenience. Perhaps, this an easy problem to solve, numbers are always revolving and we have to keep track of the graphics so we can get a better picture and offer the best value to our customer experience plan. Best regards. RT

Dear Jenny:

I am contacting you Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
in regards of
 the past This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
. We should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 together for further
 analysis and development of the matter, if you want, we can set up an appointment to your earliest convenience.

Perhaps, this an easy problem to solve, numbers are always Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).revolving, and
revolving and
 we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 of the graphics This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a better picture and offer the best value to our customer experience plan.

Best regards.

RT