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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work BOe9
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you about my problems related to the current room mate. The college accommodation itself is good but the living condition is getting intolerable. Because of this situation, my studies and work are being affected. Let me elucidate my situation in more detail. The problem started during the semester break when my previous room mate travelled to his country for spending holidays. because of the pandemic situation prevailing all around the world, my previous room mate got stuck in his country and a new room member was shifted with me. This new room mate stays up all night jamming with his friends. Due to the loud music played in the house I am not able to sleep or study. The overall situation is not only affecting my grades but also, I am not able to complete my given assignments on time. Would you kindly provide another accommodation for me or my roommate? I would prefer a person who is cooperative and has a quiet personality. Until and unless the place is peaceful, I would not mind living with anyone. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Ushna
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you about my problems related to the
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current
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room
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mate
. The college accommodation itself is
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good
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but
the living condition is getting intolerable.
Because of this
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situation
, my studies and work are being
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affected
.

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Let
me elucidate my
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situation
in more detail. The problem
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started
during the semester break when my previous
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room
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mate
travelled to his country for spending holidays.
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because
of the pandemic
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situation
prevailing all around the world, my previous
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room
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mate
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got
stuck in his country and a new
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room
member
was shifted
with me. This new
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room
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mate
stays up all night jamming with his friends. Due to the loud music played in the
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house
I am not able to sleep or study. The
overall
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situation
is not
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only
affecting my grades
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but
also
, I am not able to complete my
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given
assignments on time.

Would you kindly provide another accommodation for me or my roommate? I would prefer a person who is cooperative and has a quiet personality. Until and unless the place is peaceful, I would not mind living with anyone.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Ushna
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IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work

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  American English
7 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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