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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties lBYo
Dear Martha, Firstly, thank you for generously accepting my request to take care of my house and my pet, Eva. I am indebted by your kind gesture. Kindly water the plants on alternate days and on Saturday morning leave the recycleable garbage outside the main door for the authorities to collect it. Additionally, I need you to feed my cat twice daily. I have stored the cat food under the kitchen sink and don't forget to bathe Eva with the purple shampoo on the bathroom counter. The vet's appointment is scheduled at 6 pm on Saturday please get her the vaccination. Lastly, don't forget to check my mailbox at least once a week. I am back on March 15th and I will be staying in Paris for the first three days of my seven day tour at Hotel Hilton, room 305 on the Fashion street. You may ring me on the hotel landline as I am unaware if my mobile phone would be reachable. ThanksAbc.
Dear Martha,
Firstly
, thank you for
generously
accepting my request to take care of my
house
and my pet, Eva. I
am indebted
by your kind gesture. Kindly water the plants on alternate days and on Saturday morning
leave
the
recycleable
garbage outside the main door for the authorities to collect it.
Additionally
, I need you to feed my cat twice daily. I have stored the cat food under the kitchen sink and don't forget to bathe Eva with the purple shampoo on the bathroom counter. The vet's appointment
is scheduled
at 6 pm on Saturday
please
get
her the vaccination.
Lastly
, don't forget to
check
my mailbox at least once a week. I am back on March 15th and I will be staying in Paris for the
first
three days of my
seven day
tour at Hotel Hilton, room 305 on the Fashion street. You may ring me on the hotel landline as I am unaware if my mobile phone would be reachable.

ThanksAbc
.
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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