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You live in a room in college that you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement, and you find it very difficult to work. describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

You live in a room in college that you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement, and you find it very difficult to work. describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer WbY0

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to complain about the issues I am facing at my student residence. I am a resident of the King Edward Hall, room 503 and I am sharing a room with an undergraduate student from the Music faculty. I am highly disappointed with the management decision to accommodate a medical student with a music student in the same room because our field of study demands very different lifestyles. I am a final year medical student currently in the later stages of doing my dissertation and I require a quieter environment to work on the research papers. However, my roommate consistently plays her instruments and often brings friends over to practice with her, which is extremely distracting and have a negative impact on my work. I would appreciate it if you could provide me with a furnished studio apartment in another residence for the rest of my stay. If this arrangement is not available, could you please transfer me to a quieter location with a more studious flatmate. I look forward to your favourable response. Yours faithfully, Audrey Raines

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to complain about the issues I am facing at my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 residence.

I am a resident of the King Edward Hall, room Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).503, and
503 and
 I am sharing a room with an undergraduate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 from the Music faculty. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am highly
 disappointed with the management decision to accommodate a medical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 with a music You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 in the same room This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 our field of study demands This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 lifestyles.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am a final year medical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
currently
 in the later stages of doing my dissertation and I require a quieter environment to work on the research papers. However
, my roommate consistently
 plays her instruments and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 brings friends over to practice with her, which is extremely
 distracting and have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impact on my work.

I would appreciate it if you could provide me with a furnished studio apartment in another residence for the rest of my stay. If this arrangement is not available, could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 transfer me to a quieter location with a more studious flatmate.

I look forward to your Possible spelling mistake. 'favourable' is British English.favorable
favourable
 response.

Yours faithfully
,

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Raines