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Write a letter to your boss apologising for the recent meeting you missed at work. 1. Apologise for missing the meeting. 2. Explain what happened. 3. Say what you will do to compensate. Write not less than 150 words.

Write a letter to your boss apologising for the recent meeting you missed at work. 1. Apologise for missing the meeting. 2. Explain what happened. 3. Say what you will do to compensate. Write not less than 150 words. 7eWX
Dear Mr. Godwin, I am writing this letter to apologize for not attending the meeting held on March 25, 2020 about company development plans. I know the meeting was crucial one and i shouldn't have skipped at my end. Unfortunately, I encountered with an exigency at my home. My grandmother felled down while climbing up the stairs accidentally and so I had to rush her to a nearby hospital immediately. Although the doctor has confirmed that was a minor fracture on ankle, I was engaged with buying medicines and looking after her throughout the day. I would like to assure you that I have referred to the minutes of meeting and also aware of the key points discussed from Mr. Gunaseelan, Senior Assistant Manager. By the end of the day, I will be up to speed with all the plans. I hope you will forgive my absence and be assured of my commitment to this company and its future. Yours sincerely, Lavanya Manoharan
Dear Mr. Godwin, I am writing this letter to apologize for not attending the meeting held on March 25,
Some style guides suggest that commas should set off the year in a month-day-year date: "2020,".
2020
about
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company
development plans. I know the meeting was crucial one and
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i
shouldn't have skipped at my
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end
. Unfortunately, I encountered with an exigency at my home. My grandmother felled down while climbing up the stairs
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
accidentally and
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so
I had to rush her to a nearby hospital immediately. Although the doctor has confirmed that was a minor fracture on ankle, I
was engaged
with buying medicines and looking after her throughout the day. I would like to assure you that I have referred to the minutes of meeting and
also
aware of the key points discussed from Mr.
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Gunaseelan
, Senior Assistant Manager. By the
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end
of the day, I will be up to speed with all the plans. I hope you will forgive my absence and
be assured
of my commitment to this
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company
and its future. Yours
sincerely
,
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Lavanya
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Manoharan
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your boss apologising for the recent meeting you missed at work. 1. Apologise for missing the meeting. 2. Explain what happened. 3. Say what you will do to compensate. Write not less than 150 words.

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1 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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