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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.

You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Mp3N
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to provide you the feedback for my cookery classes that i attended few days back in your school. I had an immense learning during the lesson and i am glad to share my views on the same. All the sessions were practically planned and trainer could able communicate ever depth of the details related to cooking, they also involved individual in practical sessions. I will rate this 9 out of 10 as a over all feedback, one mark i am deducting for non avablity of utensiles for every individual. Overall, I am satisfied post attending all your classes and able to attain what i was looking for specifically. Your faithfully, Nitin
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to provide you the feedback for my cookery classes that
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
attended few days back in your school. I had an immense learning during the lesson and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am glad to share my views on the same.

All the sessions were
practically
planned and trainer
Did you mean "could be able"?
could able
communicate ever depth of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
related to cooking, they
also
involved individual in practical sessions. I will rate this 9 out of 10 as
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
over all feedback, one mark
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am deducting for non
Possible spelling mistake found.
avablity
of
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "utensils", the plural form of the noun 'utensil'?
utensiles
for every individual.

Overall
, I
am satisfied
post attending all your classes and able to attain what
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was looking for
specifically
.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
, Nitin
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IELTS letter You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
117 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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