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You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you

You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you K23w

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you that I would like to buy few electrical goods at your shop which is at Victoria street, as the house which I bought recently is very near to your shop. I will list down the items which I need and could you please check and confirm whether they are currently available and in case if they aren't will it be possible to place an order. The list of items I would require would be 500 meters of cable wire, 5 sets of 10 amp switches, 10 sets of 1 inch pipe and 10 switch boards, If you wouldn't mind me asking can you also list down the price for each of these items as well and will it be possible to hold these items for me until next week. As currently I am out of town and would be returning no sooner than early next week. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sam

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 few electrical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 at your shop which is at Victoria street, as the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 recently is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 near to your shop. I will list down the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
 which I need and could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 and confirm whether they are currently
 available and in case if they aren't will it be possible to place an order.

The list of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
 I would require would be 500 meters of cable wire, 5 sets of 10 amp switches, 10 sets of Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.1 inch (2.54 cm)1 inch (2.54 centimeters)1 inch (ca. 25 mm)1 inch (25.4 mm)1 inch (ca. 25 micrometers)1 inch (25.4 micrometers)
1 inch
 pipe and 10 switch boards, If you wouldn't mind me asking can you also
 list down the price for each of these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
as well
 and will it be possible to hold these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
 for me until next
 week. As currently
 I am out of town and would be returning no sooner than early next
 week.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
,

Sam