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or the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary.​ ​In your letter ● state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this ● give details of how you have benefited from the club ● explain why you want to leave

or the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. ​ ​In your letter ● state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this ● give details of how you have benefited from the club ● explain why you want to leave ej3K
I am writing this letter to make a complaint about the connection to the Internet in my room. My name is Christopher Pell and I am a law student currently residing in Elm’s Wood Halls of Residence on the Malone Road. I am a post-graduate student currently in the latter stages of doing my Master’s dissertation. I live in the new complex in A block on the fifth floor, room 15. A few times a day, without warning, the internet connection suddenly stops and when I run the troubleshooting program on my computer it states that there is an issue with the IP address. This is very inconvenient for me because it means that I have to stop work and go to a local coffee shop to get online. I would like it if one of your technicians could come around as soon as possible and test the line and establish the problem. Someone looked at it last week and said that everything was fine, but it is obviously not. I pay twenty pounds a month for the line and I do not think that this is satisfactory service. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Christopher Pell
I am writing this letter to
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make
a complaint about the connection to the Internet in my room.

My name is Christopher
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Pell and
I am a law student
currently
residing in Elm’s Wood Halls of Residence on the Malone Road. I am a post-graduate student
currently
in the latter stages of doing my
In the US, the word 'dissertation' is usually for doctoral degrees. Did you mean "Master’s thesis"?
Master’s dissertation
. I
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live
in the new complex in A block on the fifth floor, room 15.

A few times a day, without warning, the internet connection
suddenly
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stops
and when I run the troubleshooting program on my computer it states that there is an issue with the IP address. This is
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very
inconvenient for me
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because
it means that I
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have to
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stop
work and go to a local coffee shop to
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get
online.

I would like it if one of your technicians could
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come
around as
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soon
as possible and
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test
the line and establish the problem. Someone looked at it last week and said that everything was fine,
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but
it is
obviously
not. I pay twenty pounds a month for the line and I do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that this is satisfactory service.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Christopher
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Pell
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IELTS letter or the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. ​ ​In your letter ● state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this ● give details of how you have benefited from the club ● explain why you want to leave

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