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You live in a house near a park. Recently, a lot of teenagers have been meeting in the park at night. They are very noisy.

You live in a house near a park. Recently, a lot of teenagers have been meeting in the park at night. They are very noisy. yDgrE
Dear Sir, Since 2003, I have been living with my family of five in Skylark Apartment in Sector 10, Dwarka, but now, it is increasingly becoming quiet an unsuitable place for living. These days, Tommy's Park, being contiguous to our society, has been turned out to be a gathering and amusement spot for youngsters, especially after 10 pm. As the guard remains there until 8pm, people do whatever they want to do thereafter, ranging from shouting to drinking and even consuming drugs. What goes on there becomes clearly visible from my flat # 102 which easily overlooks that area. We are now fed up with all these unbearable shouting and harrowing noise. My children could not even concentrate on theirlate-night studies. The situation is getting worse day-by-day. Having a dedicated night guard facility to police the area, I believe, would be more than enough, in that, they are just overindulging children, and so, this simple step would be an effective measure to take them away. I hope you would consider this matter on priority and take necessary action at the earliest. If needed, I am available ay time at 555-555-555. Regards, Manu Jain
Dear Sir,

Since 2003, I have been living with my family of five in Skylark Apartment in Sector 10,
Dwarka
,
but
now
, it is
increasingly
becoming quiet an unsuitable place for living.

These days, Tommy's Park, being contiguous to our society, has
been turned
out to be a gathering and amusement spot for youngsters,
especially
after 10 pm. As the guard remains there until 8pm,
people
do whatever they want to do thereafter, ranging from shouting to drinking and even consuming drugs.

What goes on there becomes
clearly
visible from my flat # 102 which
easily
overlooks that area. We are
now
fed up with all these unbearable shouting and harrowing noise. My children could not even concentrate on
theirlate-night
studies. The situation is getting worse day-by-day.

Having a dedicated night guard facility to police the area, I believe, would be more than
enough
, in that, they are
just
overindulging children, and
so
, this simple step would be an effective measure to take them away.

I hope you would consider this matter on priority and take necessary action at the earliest. If needed, I am available
ay
time at 555-555-555.

Regards,

Manu
Jain
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IELTS letter You live in a house near a park. Recently, a lot of teenagers have been meeting in the park at night. They are very noisy.

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