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You have found a new job. write a letter to your current manager about it. In the letter: Explain why you made the change, Tell your supervisor something positive aout your current job.Thank your supervisor for something

You have found a new job. write a letter to your current manager about it. In the letter: Explain why you made the change, Tell your supervisor something positive aout your current job. Thank your supervisor for something Ydm7V
Dear Mr. Singh, I am writing this letter to inform you about my new job opportunity in a product based multinational organisation. I was quite satisfied with my current job position, however, my father got transferred in Banglore which is 600kilometer far from our city. This was the cause that I have to change not only city but job. My current position was full of challenges which is why i liked this because challenges assist me to work in any hard condition. However, i got successful to search new job only of the learning while working here. I would like to thank you for your support from beginning to end. Although, you were my senior manager but always advised me like a friend. I always keep your optimistic behaviour in my mind which will help to in tough situations. Hope to hear from you back soon! Yours faithfully, Rohan
Dear Mr. Singh, I am writing this letter to inform you about my new
job
opportunity in a product based multinational
organisation
. I was quite satisfied with my
current
job
position,
however
, my father
got
transferred in
Banglore
which is 600kilometer far from our city. This was the cause that I
have to
change
not
only
city
but
job
. My
current
position was full of challenges which is why
i
liked this
because
challenges assist me to work in any
hard
condition.
However
,
i
got
successful to search new
job
only
of the learning while working here. I would like to thank you for your support from beginning to
end
. Although, you were my senior manager
but
always advised me like a friend. I always
keep
your optimistic
behaviour
in my mind which will
help
to in tough situations. Hope to hear from you back
soon
! Yours
faithfully
,
Rohan
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IELTS letter You have found a new job. write a letter to your current manager about it. In the letter: Explain why you made the change, Tell your supervisor something positive aout your current job. Thank your supervisor for something

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  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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