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You have found a new job. write a letter to your current manager about it. In the letter: Explain why you made the change, Tell your supervisor something positive aout your current job.Thank your supervisor for something

You have found a new job. write a letter to your current manager about it. In the letter: Explain why you made the change, Tell your supervisor something positive aout your current job. Thank your supervisor for something Ydm7V
Dear Mr. Singh, I am writing this letter to inform you about my new job opportunity in a product based multinational organisation. I was quite satisfied with my current job position, however, my father got transferred in Banglore which is 600kilometer far from our city. This was the cause that I have to change not only city but job. My current position was full of challenges which is why i liked this because challenges assist me to work in any hard condition. However, i got successful to search new job only of the learning while working here. I would like to thank you for your support from beginning to end. Although, you were my senior manager but always advised me like a friend. I always keep your optimistic behaviour in my mind which will help to in tough situations. Hope to hear from you back soon! Yours faithfully, Rohan
Dear Mr. Singh, I am writing this letter to inform you about my new
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job
opportunity in a product based multinational
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organisation
. I was quite satisfied with my
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current
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position,
however
, my father
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got
transferred in
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Banglore
which is 600kilometer far from our city. This was the cause that I
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have to
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change
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only
city
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but
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job
. My
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current
position was full of challenges which is why
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i
liked this
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because
challenges assist me to work in any
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hard
condition.
However
,
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i
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got
successful to search new
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job
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only
of the learning while working here. I would like to thank you for your support from beginning to
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end
. Although, you were my senior manager
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but
always advised me like a friend. I always
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keep
your optimistic
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behaviour
in my mind which will
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help
to in tough situations. Hope to hear from you back
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soon
! Yours
faithfully
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Rohan

IELTS letter You have found a new job. write a letter to your current manager about it. In the letter: Explain why you made the change, Tell your supervisor something positive aout your current job. Thank your supervisor for something

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  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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