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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have received an email form Ms. Johnston, a personnel staff member of Vingroup. Read part of the email from her below. My name is Mary Johnston, a personnel staff member of Vingroup. We are currently recruiting a number of positions as advertised on vietnamworks.com. If you are interested, please write an email to apply for the job you like, telling us your education background and experience that suit the vacancy.

You have received an email form Ms. Johnston, a personnel staff member of Vingroup. Read part of the email from her below. My name is Mary Johnston, a personnel staff member of Vingroup. We are currently recruiting a number of positions as advertised on vietnamworks. com. If you are interested, please write an email to apply for the job you like, telling us your education background and experience that suit the vacancy. AgaYl
Dear Ms. Johnson, I am writing with reference to the position of an interpreter in Vingroup as advertised on vietnamworks. com. Please find enclosed a copy of my CV outlining my background and qualifications for your consideration. Regarding my education background, I graduated with a Master's degree in English major at Hai Phong University in 2021. In addition, I am also fluent in Chinese language with HSK6 and HSKK Advanced Certificate. In terms of my relevant experience, I worked as an English teacher at English Center for 3 years and have many opportunities to improve speaking skills when communicating with foreign teachers during college. I also worked as an Chinese interpreter for foreign companies. I am sure that my work experiences can make me fit this job. If given the opportunity, I am confident that I could make a valuable contribution to the running of the company. Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely,
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Hai
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when communicating with foreign teachers during college. I
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Chinese interpreter for foreign
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companies
. I am sure that my work experiences can
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me fit this job. If
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make
a valuable contribution to the running of the
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company
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IELTS letter You have received an email form Ms. Johnston, a personnel staff member of Vingroup. Read part of the email from her below. My name is Mary Johnston, a personnel staff member of Vingroup. We are currently recruiting a number of positions as advertised on vietnamworks. com. If you are interested, please write an email to apply for the job you like, telling us your education background and experience that suit the vacancy.

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