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ACTIVITIES IN COVID 19 PANDEMIC

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Hello everyone, today is Sunday, I will cook chicken stew with lemongrass for my whole family to eat during the covid-19 pandemic and here are the ingredients to make lemongrass chicken stock: sugar, cooking oil, lemongrass. he recipe for me to make chicken with lemongrass is difficult, I will put it on the video, everyone.  I'll put the oil in first.  Stir the oil evenly.  Then I'll putlemongrass in.  After that, I will putlemongrass in and fry it until fragrant, put a little garlic,  onion in.  then I'll givesugar in,  add salt,  add msg.  I will stir it up.  Next I will add fish sauce.  Next I willput the chicken in everyone.  Next I willput water in everyone,  just a little bit ofwater.  Now I let the chicken cook for 30 minutes and then I invite my sister to enjoy it.  After 30 minutes the dish is also done and now I will take it out for my sister to enjoy.  It's very delicious. At this point, my video has also ended, I would like to say goodbye to everyone, wish everyone good health to fight the covid-19 epidemic together.
Hello
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today
is Sunday, I will cook chicken stew with lemongrass for my whole family to eat during the
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covid-19
pandemic and here are the ingredients to
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make
lemongrass chicken stock: sugar, cooking oil, lemongrass.

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he
recipe for me to
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make
chicken with lemongrass is difficult, I will put it on the video,
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everyone
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first
.  Stir the oil 
evenly
.  Then I'll 
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putlemongrass
 in.  After that, I will 
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putlemongrass
 in and fry it until fragrant, put a 
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little
 garlic,
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onion in.  
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then
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givesugar
 in,
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add
 salt,
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add
 
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msg
.  I will stir it up.  
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 fish sauce.  
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 water in everyone,
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.  
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Now
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let
the chicken cook for 30 minutes and then I invite my sister to enjoy it.  After 30 minutes the dish is
also
done and
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now
I will take it out for my sister to enjoy.  It's
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very
delicious.

At this point, my video has
also
ended, I would like to say goodbye to
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everyone
, wish
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everyone
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good
health to fight the
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covid-19
epidemic together.
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3 paragraphs
141 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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