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Write a email to introduct your hometown to your foreign friend

Write a email to introduct your hometown to your foreign friend OyE73
Dear Maryan, I felt really happy when you informed me about your plan to visit my city. Well, although you stay in Kon Tum in only one day, I am sure that you will have a good time hereWell, there are so many interesting places in this city but now I will recommend three places. The first is the Wooden Church, it is a cross between Roman architecture and wooden stilt houses of the Bana. Scenery in here is also beautiful, you can take pictures. Secondly, you should visit Kon Tum prison, the place to keep the most brutal history of this kind. There are also stone steles engraved with the names of heros and martyrs. Finally, you can visit LaLa river - the sysmbol of the city. You can speend time to go fishing here enjoy the asmosphere. It's really clearly
Dear
Maryan
, I felt
really
happy when you informed me about your plan to visit my city. Well, although you stay in
Kon
Tum in
only
one day, I am sure that you will have a
good
time
hereWell
, there are
so
many
interesting places in this city
but
now
I will recommend three places. The
first
is the Wooden Church, it is a cross between Roman architecture and wooden stilt
houses
of the
Bana
. Scenery in here is
also
beautiful
, you can take pictures.
Secondly
, you should visit
Kon
Tum prison, the place to
keep
the most brutal history of this kind. There are
also
stone
steles
engraved with the names of
heros
and martyrs.
Finally
, you can visit
LaLa
river
-
the
sysmbol
of the city. You can
speend
time to go fishing here enjoy the
asmosphere
. It's
really
clearly
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IELTS letter Write a email to introduct your hometown to your foreign friend

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  American English
1 paragraphs
141 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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