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Write a email to introduct your hometown to your foreign friend

Write a email to introduct your hometown to your foreign friend OyE73
Dear Maryan, I felt really happy when you informed me about your plan to visit my city. Well, although you stay in Kon Tum in only one day, I am sure that you will have a good time hereWell, there are so many interesting places in this city but now I will recommend three places. The first is the Wooden Church, it is a cross between Roman architecture and wooden stilt houses of the Bana. Scenery in here is also beautiful, you can take pictures. Secondly, you should visit Kon Tum prison, the place to keep the most brutal history of this kind. There are also stone steles engraved with the names of heros and martyrs. Finally, you can visit LaLa river - the sysmbol of the city. You can speend time to go fishing here enjoy the asmosphere. It's really clearly
Dear
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Maryan
, I felt
really
happy when you informed me about your plan to visit my city. Well, although you stay in
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Kon
Tum in
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only
one day, I am sure that you will have a
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good
time
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hereWell
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many
interesting places in this city
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but
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now
I will recommend three places. The
first
is the Wooden Church, it is a cross between Roman architecture and wooden stilt
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houses
of the
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Bana
. Scenery in here is
also
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beautiful
, you can take pictures.
Secondly
, you should visit
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Kon
Tum prison, the place to
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keep
the most brutal history of this kind. There are
also
stone
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steles
engraved with the names of
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heros
and martyrs.
Finally
, you can visit
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LaLa
river
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the
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sysmbol
of the city. You can
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speend
time to go fishing here enjoy the
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asmosphere
. It's
really
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clearly
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IELTS letter Write a email to introduct your hometown to your foreign friend

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  American English
1 paragraphs
141 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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