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Dear Sir/Madam, Iam writing this letter to request you to join me in the trip that you are organizing for voluntary work in developing countries. Iam a passionate traveler and a teacher, and love to teach under-privileged kids. We all know that kids are the future of the nation, hence educating kids would be very beneficial for developing countries. I would love to inform you that I am a professional teacher and I taught all grades of students for 5 years in Montessori high school. I have done my post graduation in Mathematics and science. I wish to travel to India, which is a culture rich place and is striving hard to develop as a nation. There are a lot of beautiful places in India to visit where kids have no access to education. I would love to do my part by teaching these kids. I am eagerly waiting for your response. Yours faithfully, P. Vanitha

Dear Sir/Madam,

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love
 to inform you that I am a professional teacher and I taught all grades of students for 5 years in Montessori high school. I have done my post graduation in Mathematics and science.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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hard
 to develop as a nation. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
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beautiful
 places in India to visit where You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboyinfantdaughtersonyouthteenager
kids
 have no access to education. I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to do my part by teaching these kids.

I am eagerly
 waiting for your response.

Yours faithfully
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