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You left something on a train.write a letter to a train company.

You left something on a train. write a letter to a train company. MMxL6

Dear SirI'm writing to you because I lost my phone in one of your trains. It is a Samsung Galaxy S8 and it is very valuable for me, due to the fact that it was the gift which give me my husband to my birthday and there were all pictures our last travel in countryside. On Monday; when I went to Namangan on your train. I sat down the3rd platform. There were 5 passengers. My phone was in my hand. Actually; I fell asleep after I had got into your train 5: 30. Later I realized that I had forgotten my phone. It had various valuable pictures, music, videos. Could you please take necessary action and help me in searching my phone. I also request you to convey the message to the railway staff who were on duty during that time. I'm looking for your positive feedbackYour faithfully M. H

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