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I've read your thougts about doing household chores and I would like to say about my role in our house.

I've read your thougts about doing household chores and I would like to say about my role in our house. awMdG
Dear Pam, Thank you for your letter of last week. I've read your thougts about doing household chores and I would like to say about my role in our house. Honestly, I have found myself pleasant situation if I help my Mum when I have no extra schooltasks. Every time I find mylself free I often help washing the dishes, tidying up the rooms, making salads and others. They are not make difficulties for me. When it comes to saying my words about your decision I was so happy for you. I would appreciate your plan. That's great! Before going there did you learn something about Italian? Could you please send me your pictures during your holiday. I hope I will not wait more your reply. I would be pleased if you share your impressions about Italy. Yours, Dilnoza
Dear Pam,

Thank you for your letter of last week. I've read your
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thougts
about doing household chores and I would like to say about my role in our
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.
Honestly
, I have found myself pleasant situation if I
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help
my Mum when I have no extra
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schooltasks
. Every time I find
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mylself
free I
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often
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help
washing the dishes, tidying up the rooms, making salads
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and others
. They are not
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make
difficulties for me.

When it
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comes
to saying my words about your decision I was
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so
happy for you. I would appreciate your plan. That's great!
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Before
going there did you learn something about Italian? Could you
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please
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send
me your pictures during your holiday. I hope I will not wait more your reply. I would be
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pleased
if you share your impressions about Italy.

Yours,

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Dilnoza
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IELTS letter I've read your thougts about doing household chores and I would like to say about my role in our house.

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  American English
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138 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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