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You gave a renovation contract of your home to a builder but you are dissatisfied with the builder's work.

You gave a renovation contract of your home to a builder but you are dissatisfied with the builder's work. jRenN

Dear Mohan, I am surprise, you have completed your repair work earlier than your stated deadline. I have checked the home. But, I am very disappointed with your work. firstly, paint colour of living room's walls is awkward and anyone can pointout the concentration difference of colour at various spots. secondly, wash-bin of the kitchen is leaking. Now, If I start live in the house, It will not give me and my family a pleasent look that we are seeking after restoration. while, leaking wash-bin can make trouble during utensils washing and lot of water wastage. I strongly feel, You should make desirable changes on walls paint and wash-bin leakage problem so that, I can release your remaining payment. for this l am extending contract for five days more to complete the work. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Jaswinder Singh

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Mohan
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checked
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very
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start
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so
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for
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 extending contract for five days more to complete the work. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely
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