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You left a foreign land without meeting your friend. Write to her about circumstances stating .why you were not able to see her in the end. Invite her to your country and update about your plans to visit her country.

You left a foreign land without meeting your friend. Write to her about circumstances stating. why you were not able to see her in the end. Invite her to your country and update about your plans to visit her country. 06YwQ
Hi Divya, I hope you are doing great. I have come back home safely. I feel shame because I could not meet you before leaving your hometown. My next meeting held in Delhi. So that's why i came back early. You know that I'm not good at time management. I face difficulty when I visit any place. you know very well. i have been working a multinational company. Even I do not know about the meetings which are held by my boss. without any excuses I have to attend meetings. Next month, my brother's marriage has been fixed to be organized. You always ready to explore different cultures and traditions. It may be best time for you to explore my culture. I invite you with all family members. Furthermore, there are several places for holidays but I think that we 'all go to shimla. The weather is very pleasant in shimla. There are various antique shops where you can purchase souvenirs. Hope you enjoy this trip and we both make it memorable. Your lovingly, Gita8o
Hi Divya, I hope you are doing great. I have
come
back home
safely
. I feel shame
because
I could not
meet
you
before
leaving your hometown. My
next
meeting held in Delhi.
So
that's why
i
came back early. You know that I'm not
good
at time management. I face difficulty when I visit any place.
you
know
very
well.
i
have been working a multinational
company
. Even I do not know about the meetings which
are held
by my boss.
without
any excuses I
have to
attend meetings.
Next
month, my brother's marriage has been
fixed
to
be organized
. You always ready to explore
different
cultures and traditions. It may
be best
time for you to explore my culture. I invite you with all family members.
Furthermore
, there are several places for holidays
but
I
think
that we 'all go to
shimla
. The weather is
very
pleasant in
shimla
. There are various antique shops where you can
purchase
souvenirs. Hope you enjoy this
trip and
we both
make
it memorable. Your
lovingly
,
Gita8o
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IELTS letter You left a foreign land without meeting your friend. Write to her about circumstances stating. why you were not able to see her in the end. Invite her to your country and update about your plans to visit her country.

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