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A family member is planning to visit your country and has asked for advice on where to travel. Write a family member and give them some information in your letter, Describe the last time you saw your family member. Explain where they should visit in your country. Suggest an activity you can do together.

A family member is planning to visit your country and has asked for advice on where to travel. Write a family member and give them some information in your letter, Describe the last time you saw your family member. Explain where they should visit in your country. Suggest an activity you can do together. yNqb3
Dear Smith, I hope you're doing great. I'm writing a letter this response to thank you and happy news about again visit us Dubai. My baby cousin, it has been aged since your sister's wedding function on 25th April in Dubai Mall and I'm coming to visit us. I know that Dubai is a quiet place with 2nd tourist place in the world, but I'd like to attend this function. There are many amazing places in Abudhabi. I think also there are many areas in the nearest places. I'd like to be extremely famous buildings, business trade center, beaches so you'd like to that place of Burj khalifa building which world record of the height and inside restaurants, party halls, supermarkets, a milestone of the architecture building. So, I think a coated head of small cities, but I think that bushwalks with surrounding weather conditions are too hot. Perhaps, I can join us on the road trip because you're staying here later so I'm busy now and my wife Hana with a son. We are probably also could you join us one week during off. We are visiting many places, but this is a good chance to visit my place enjoy itself. I will expect you to join us soon. Your buddy, Ram Krish
Dear Smith,

I hope you're doing great. I'm writing a letter this response to thank you and happy news about again visit us Dubai. My baby cousin, it has
been aged
since your sister's wedding function on 25th April in Dubai Mall and I'm coming to visit us.

I know that Dubai is a quiet
place
with 2nd tourist
place
in the world,
but
I'd like to attend this function. There are
many
amazing
places
in
Abudhabi
. I
think
also
there are
many
areas in the nearest
places
. I'd like to be
extremely
famous
buildings, business trade center, beaches
so
you'd like to that
place
of
Burj
khalifa
building which world record of the height and inside restaurants, party halls, supermarkets, a milestone of the architecture building.
So
, I
think
a coated head of
small
cities,
but
I
think
that
bushwalks
with surrounding weather conditions are too hot.

Perhaps, I can
join
us on the road trip
because
you're staying here later
so
I'm busy
now
and my wife
Hana
with a son. We are
probably
also
could you
join
us one week during off. We are visiting
many
places
,
but
this is a
good
chance to visit my
place
enjoy itself.

I will
expect
you to
join
us
soon
.

Your buddy,

Ram
Krish
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IELTS letter A family member is planning to visit your country and has asked for advice on where to travel. Write a family member and give them some information in your letter, Describe the last time you saw your family member. Explain where they should visit in your country. Suggest an activity you can do together.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
213 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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