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My new job is great, and next month I get to travel on business. Guess what – I’m actually coming to your town for a week! I’ll be free some evenings and one weekend. I want to make the most of this opportunity, so I’d like your advice please: where to go, what to do, and why?

My new job is great, and next month I get to travel on business. Guess what – I’m actually coming to your town for a week! I’ll be free some evenings and one weekend. I want to make the most of this opportunity, so I’d like your advice please: where to go, what to do, and why? oVmr9

Dear John, How are you? Good to hear from you again. I hope you are still enjoying your new job. I'm glad you asked me about traveling on business in our town. Well, I will show you fantastic places for relaxing and you enjoy it. After your work I'll introduce you with my friends and we may go restaurants, clubs and walk around surrounding countryside. Anyway, you'll seen different familiar landscapes, open fields and not only rocky mountains but also you will take a picture of spectacular places. At the weekend we are going to play football with classmates and you will join too. Playing soccer with friends it is amazing. By the way, after the match we are going to picnic. You will take for yourself drinks and pastries. I also have some other amazing news - I bought a brand new car. It was one of my dream car and meet you from airport in my new car. Hope to hear from you soon. All the best, Bob.

Dear John,

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All the best,

Bob. 