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You do not know what profession select. Write a letter to page asking for advice.

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Dear Lucy. How are you? How is your mood? I hope that you are feeling wonderful. If you let me I will ask a question. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice about my future. As you know, you are my best cobber all time. Consequently I am writing you about my problem. Briefly I do not know what l choose a job. All kinds of the occupations are very well. However, I am thinking about two of them. One of my favorite jobs that I am thinking about is a teacher. Second is interpreter. "Teacher" this profession that is selected by most people is very useful. This occupation is worth receiving. The second trade has a lot of trips and interesting states. In light of the fact that, one who is applied for the job familiarize to people that visit our city fromforeign country and conduct to our memorable places. Now I need your support in this matter. Please, help me. I would appreciate it if you could give me your advice as in the near future as possible. Sincerely. Lisa.

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. Lisa. 