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General Writing Task 1 You rent an apartment and you are quite happy with it but you want to suggest a renovation. Write a letter about your suggestion. In your letter, you should tell: • Your appreciation of the current condition • What is the renovation and why? • What is the benefits of your suggestion?

General Writing Task 1 You rent an apartment and you are quite happy with it but you want to suggest a renovation. Write a letter about your suggestion. In your letter, you should tell: • Your appreciation of the current condition • What is the renovation and why? • What is the benefits of your suggestion? gDE1d

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter about some renovation suggestion which i think the apartment required where i live now. I rent an apartment from you. Overall, I am satisfied with the conditions and facilities which you provided in it. There are some renovation work is need in the room. The balcony windows give the specticular view of the the playground which is infront of my room. But the windows is too old and its lock stuck sometime. I tried to fix it by my self but still stuck as occacionally. Moreover, I will be happy if you change dressing table mirror. The mirror is good in condition but fashion outdated. I also get some comments about the dressing table one of my friend. He suggested me if I want to change that on he will help me. Because I think all the furniture are quite new and this is the only thing which is outdated. I believe that if you make these small changes renovation then it would be the perfect place for live. I hope you consider my suggestion and send some workers for small renovation. your faithfully, Avtar Singh

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter about This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 renovation suggestion which Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 the apartment required where Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

I rent an apartment from you. Overall
, I am satisfied
 with the conditions and facilities which you provided in it. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 renovation work is need
 in the room. The balcony windows give the Possible spelling mistake found.spectacular
specticular
 view of Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.the
the the
 playground which is Possible spelling mistake found.in front
infront
 of my room. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 the windows is too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and its lock stuck sometime. I tried to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 it by my self This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
still
 stuck as Possible spelling mistake found.occasionally
occacionally
. Moreover
, I will be happy if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 dressing table mirror. The mirror is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 in condition This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 fashion outdated. I also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 comments about the dressing table one of my friend. He suggested me if I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 that on he will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 all the furniture are quite new and this is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 thing which is outdated
. I believe that if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 these This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 renovation then it would be the perfect place for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
.

I hope you consider my suggestion and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 workers for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 renovation.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
your
faithfully
,

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 Singh