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You learned news from your friend regarding a part time job at new International company near your house.

You learned news from your friend regarding a part time job at new International company near your house. BgNKd

Dear sir and madam My name is niraj. I am writing this letter to you regarding part time job at your International company. I am pursuing MSc in computing science in 1st semester. However I need practical knowledge that will achieve to work in related field and this position of job is regarding to my filed. Moreover. I would like to tell you that I earned software certificate and coding certificate which will be beneficial for your company. I will do software testing, coding and find the error in software in your company. Also, if you need me for weekend I will be available. One more positive thing is that, one of your branch of this company is located in East London Side which 20 min walking distance from my home. Also my friend suggested me there is vacancy for part time job I am really appreciate if you provide me this position. Last but not least, I prefer to work night shifts from 5 to 11 pm. I hope you will consider me to give chance. Awaiting your reply. Thankfully, Niraj.

Dear sir and madam

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to you regarding This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
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job at your InternationalPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
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. I am pursuingPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
Consider using a more common abbreviation of this university degree.M.Sc.
MSc
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semester. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
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that will achievePossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
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of job is The phrase 'regarding to' is not correct. Use "regarding" or "regard to".regardingregard to
regarding to
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Moreover
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I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
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certificate and coding certificate which will be beneficialPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
for your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
. I will do softwarePossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
testing,Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
codingPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
and find the error in software in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
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, if you need me for weekend I will be available. Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
One more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 thing is that, one ofPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
your branch of thisPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
is located
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London Side which 20 min walking distance from my home.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
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me there is vacancyPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
for This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
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jobPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
I am really
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Consider using a past participle here: "appreciated".appreciated
appreciate
 if you provide me this position. Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, I prefer to workPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
night shifts from 5 to 11 pm. I hope you will consider me to give chance. Awaiting your reply. Thankfully
,

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