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places of interest in my hometown

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dear dan, I'm so excited that you're coming to visit Hanoi, the capital city of Vietnam. Hanoi is well known for its preserved buildings, museums, and ancient pagodas. The reason why you should visit Hanoi is that Hanoi is a pot of Vietnam's culinary. You can easily find all kinds of delicacies in the city which come from other provinces. For example, Banh Cuon, La Vong grilled fish, Nem, and so on. Moreover, water puppetry is our unique performance art. The puppets are made from wood, and artists use those puppets to tell traditional folk tales. Thang Long theater on Hoan Kiem lake is where you can find such an excellent performance. In addition, Hanoi is also proud of its scenic spots. The most popular in Hanoi are calm lakes such as Hoan Kiem lake, Truc Bach Lake, West Lake, Bay Mau lake, and so on. The lakes are shaded by trees on the surface of the lake
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excited that you're coming to visit Hanoi, the capital city of Vietnam. Hanoi is well known for its preserved buildings, museums, and ancient pagodas. The reason why you should visit Hanoi is that Hanoi is a pot of Vietnam's culinary. You can
easily
find all kinds of delicacies in the city which
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, water puppetry is our unique performance art. The puppets
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traditional folk tales.
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Long theater on
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is where you can find such an excellent performance.
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, Hanoi is
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proud of its scenic spots. The most popular in Hanoi are calm
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Kiem
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,
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2 paragraphs
157 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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