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Hi, Please send me answers for these questions. 1.what is the qualification I can get from this particular course (is it a post graduate diploma/certificate course) 2.is the qualification I get from this course consider as equal to a post graduate diploma in terms of job opportunities.

Hi, Please send me answers for these questions. 1. what is the qualification I can get from this particular course (is it a post graduate diploma/certificate course) 2. is the qualification I get from this course consider as equal to a post graduate diploma in terms of job opportunities. 3LEAm
Hi, Please send me answers for these questions. 1. what is the qualification I can get from this particular course (is it a post graduate diploma/certificate course) 2. is the qualification I get from this course consider as equal to a post graduate diploma in terms of job opportunities. 3. to get a job as a project management field is this qualification enough. 4. does this course have 2/3 post graduate work permit? PS – please find the below link to refer to the programme I’m interested
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a job as a project management field is this qualification
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have 2/3 post graduate work permit?

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IELTS letter Hi, Please send me answers for these questions. 1. what is the qualification I can get from this particular course (is it a post graduate diploma/certificate course) 2. is the qualification I get from this course consider as equal to a post graduate diploma in terms of job opportunities.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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