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Dear sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to complain about the bad service which I have received from your bank. Two weeks ago, I have requested a new cheque book for my Current account, unfortunately I did not receive it until now more than 3 weeks have surpassed. I have really lot of important bills to be paid, am getting delayed because of cheque book. A lot of customers are waiting for clearance of their payment, which effecting my business severely. So, I went to the bank to complain reading this issue, but none was ready to give a proper answer what exactly making delay in delivering my Cheque book. I insisted them to check with courier service company to get the details but misfortune nothing has come out. Take some action on my problem, hoping the resolution as soon as possible. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Shravan lal
Dear sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about the
bad
service which I have received from your bank. Two weeks ago, I have requested a new
cheque
book for my
Current
account, unfortunately I did not receive it until
now
more than 3 weeks have surpassed.

I have
really
lot of
important
bills to
be paid
,
am
getting delayed
because
of
cheque
book.

A lot of
customers are waiting for clearance of their payment, which effecting my business
severely
.

So
, I went to the bank to complain reading this issue,
but
none was ready to give a proper answer what exactly making delay in delivering my
Cheque
book. I insisted them to
check
with courier service
company
to
get
the
details
but
misfortune nothing has
come
out.

Take
some
action on my problem, hoping the resolution as
soon
as possible.

Thank you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Shravan
lal
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IELTS letter complain About the bad service

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
147 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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