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Write a letter to your friend and ask him to translate an important document

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Dear Tanuj, Hope this letter finds you in good health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to request you if you can help me in translation of some documents, which are in French. My company decided to expand its business to overseas. Last week, I had a meeting with a France based company and they was impressed with my presentation. After studied the report they sent us the agreement. My boss gave it to me to read carefully and understand the terms and conditions. It is very crucial for me as a career point of view. This agreement is in French language and I do not have knowledge of it. I tried to translate it online but online tools are not reliable. I remembered that you learnt French when you shifted to Canada and you have also knowledge of foreign business terms as you are working there from a long time. I am sharing the documents through the Google drive. Please do it as soon as possible, because I need these documents on Monday of next week. Thank you for your help in advance. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours lovingly, Ritika
Dear
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Tanuj
,

Hope this letter finds you in
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good
health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to request you if you can
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help
me in translation of
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some
documents, which are in French.

My
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company
decided to expand its business to overseas. Last week, I had a meeting with a France based
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company and
they
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was
impressed with my presentation.
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After
studied the report they
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sent
us the agreement. My boss gave it to me to read
carefully
and understand the terms and conditions. It is
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very
crucial for me as a career point of view.

This agreement is in French language and I do not have knowledge of it. I tried to translate it online
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but
online tools are not reliable. I remembered that you
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learnt
French when you shifted to Canada and you have
also
knowledge of foreign business terms as you are working there from a long time.

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I
am sharing the documents through the
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Google drive
.
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Please
do it as
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soon
as possible,
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because
I need these documents on Monday of
next
week. Thank you for your
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help
in advance.

Hope to hear from you
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soon
.

Yours
lovingly
,

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Ritika
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend and ask him to translate an important document

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8 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
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