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You knew that a building company is planning to build a new house in an area near to your house write a letter to the manager of the company in your letter say how you knew about their plan explain how yiu fell about it what do you hope to be done for new project

You knew that a building company is planning to build a new house in an area near to your house write a letter to the manager of the company in your letter say how you knew about their plan explain how yiu fell about it what do you hope to be done for new project 3xNyl
Dear sir/MadamI hope you are fine. I am writing a letter to express my satisfaction regarding to build a new house near to my home. Firstly, I am alash sanjel from damak municipality. However, I lived here from past 30 years ago. Also, when I went to my neighbours house to organise saftey and awarness of environment at that time she told me about great news. Similarly, when I heard about that news I felt so happy and exicited. Moreover, someone is comming here to become a family in our community. Whereas, I tell to my girlfriend arika too. she would also get her friend and spend some good times with new ones. As result, I would like to hope that in our society there is a problem of grocery store and vegetable market. I will launch as soon as possible. I look forward to your prompt reply. Yours faithfully, Alash
Dear sir/
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MadamI
hope you are fine. I am writing a letter to express my satisfaction
The phrase 'regarding to' is not correct. Use "regarding" or "regard to".
regarding to
build a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
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house
near to my home.
Firstly
, I am
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alash
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sanjel
from
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damak
municipality.
However
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lived
here from past 30 years ago.
Also
, when I went to my
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neighbours
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
to
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organise
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saftey
and
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awarness
of environment at that time she
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me about great
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
.
Similarly
, when I heard about that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
I felt
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so
happy and
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exicited
.
Moreover
, someone is
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comming
here to become a family in our community.
“Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
to my girlfriend
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arika
too.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
she
would
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
her friend and spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
times with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
ones. As result, I would like to hope that in our society there is a problem of grocery store and vegetable market. I will launch as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible. I look forward to your prompt reply. Yours
faithfully
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Alash

IELTS letter You knew that a building company is planning to build a new house in an area near to your house write a letter to the manager of the company in your letter say how you knew about their plan explain how yiu fell about it what do you hope to be done for new project

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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