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You bought an item from a shop. Unfortunately, it is not a good. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the shop where you bought.

You bought an item from a shop. Unfortunately, it is not a good. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the shop where you bought. NVa5d
Dear Sir/Madam. I am writing to complain about a be torn book that I purchased at your roadside. While the book was being sold, I was said ' You don't deplore this book ' on the contrary it doesn't that event what you said. Furthermore, when the item was being merchandised by your employees, they said ' If the stuff is inferior, we will turn back your money. ' Consequently, after I firstly knew this mistake, I went to your shop and I told to them these events on the contrary they didn't acknowledge. After some days, I contacted at your shop again and was told that nothing could be done about my issue. I believe that this response is unfair owing to the fact that you said to me your product was very healthily. I would like a written statement explaining your company's position and what you will do about my complaint. I sent the book back to your shop after having been assured by one of the assistants that I would be sent a refund. However, I still have not received one. As a regular customer of yours, I feel disappointed with the way I have been treated and hope that steps will be taken to rectify the situation. I trust this matter will receive your immediate affection. Yours faithfully. Sarah.
Dear Sir/Madam. I am writing to complain about a
be torn
book
that I
purchased
at your roadside. While the
book
was
being sold
, I
was said
'
You don't deplore this
book
'
on the contrary
it doesn't that
event
what you said.
Furthermore
, when the item was
being merchandised
by your employees, they said
'
If the stuff is inferior, we will turn back your money. '
Consequently
, after I
firstly
knew this mistake, I went to your shop and I
told
to them
these
events
on the contrary
they didn't acknowledge. After
some
days, I contacted at your shop again and was
told
that nothing could
be done
about my issue. I believe that this response is unfair owing to the fact that you said to me your product was
very
healthily
. I would like a written statement explaining your
company
's position and what you will do about my complaint.
I
sent
the
book
back to your shop after having
been assured
by one of the assistants that I would be
sent
a refund.
However
, I
still
have not received one. As a regular customer of
yours
, I feel disappointed with the way I have
been treated
and hope that steps will
be taken
to rectify the situation. I trust this matter will receive your immediate affection.
Yours
faithfully
. Sarah.
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IELTS letter You bought an item from a shop. Unfortunately, it is not a good. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the shop where you bought.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
223 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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