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You have heard about a new product or service which you think could be used in your job to make your work easier write a letter to your manager in your letter tell him her about the product or service explain why this product or service would be good for your work tell him/ her what you think to purchase next.

You have heard about a new product or service which you think could be used in your job to make your work easier write a letter to your manager in your letter tell him her about the product or service explain why this product or service would be good for your work tell him/ her what you think to purchase next. k5qYO

Dear jil, I hope you are good there in your place there. I am writing a letter to let you know that yesterday I had heard about a news of new equipment in social networking site. Firstly, As you know that we are regular staff of your company from last 5 years ago. However, when I was in my friend birthday party at that moment I clicked some photos and upload in facebook at that time john tell me about the product commi oven. Moreover, then i saw on kinmel page I found this new equipment with a lot of features and I thought its very helpful for daily use. Additionally, It's new tool so these days because of higher work load and pressure it's very difficult to manage these products. Whereas, It's very necessary for our company and it save our time to cook other dishese in busy times. As a result, I am thinking to buy another product meat mincer for making kebabs and momos too. It will be very easy to do all work in short time period. I look forward to your quick reply. Yours faithfully, Alash

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