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Dear Paul, Hi, how are you? I am writing to let you know that I have got a job and have started teaching computer science at Lotus School near my house. Hopefully I will be at peace here because I am happy with my work culture. It’s a new school, much closer to my apartment because of which I am able to save time. I even bought a cycle to ride to school, just like my students. I have to report to work every day from Monday to Saturday from 6am to 1pm. Although I have to get up early, I still get to rest in the evenings. My career also seems on the right track. I am also in charge of call log register at my school. My pay is 15$ per hour which is quite decent. So, tell me how’s your life? Are you going to California to meet Som. Miss good old school days. Cheers, Jay.

Dear Paul,

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Cheers,

Jay. 