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My informal letter about my friends.

My informal letter about my friends. nVr8K
I'm writing complain about a meal We had in your restaurant yesterday. We had booked a table for seven but when we arrived there were no free tables and we had to wait for more than fourty five minutes to sit down. From a menu of 12 dishes, only four were available and their quality was poor. The fish in particular, tasted awful and the waiter was rude when we told him about this. We have eaten in your restaurant several times in the past but this is the past about such bad treatment. I'm not asking for a refund, but I would like you to improve the quality of your dishes and service.
I'm writing complain about a meal We had in your restaurant yesterday. We had booked a table for seven
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but
when we arrived there were no free
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tables and
we had to wait for more than
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fourty
five minutes to sit down. From a menu of 12 dishes,
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only
four were available and their quality was poor. The fish
in particular
, tasted awful and the waiter was rude when we
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told
him about this. We have eaten in your restaurant several times in the past
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but
this is the past about such
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bad
treatment. I'm not asking for a refund,
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but
I would like you to
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improve
the quality of your dishes and service.
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IELTS letter My informal letter about my friends.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
114 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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