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You just recently ate at a restaurant, and you were dissatisfied with the food. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: • Introduce yourself • State what you did not like about the food • Say what action you wish for the management to take

You just recently ate at a restaurant, and you were dissatisfied with the food. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: • Introduce yourself • State what you did not like about the food • Say what action you wish for the management to take 111O7
Dear Sir or Madam, I am one of your customers who had dinner at your restaurant a couple of nights ago. I am writing to complain about the quality of the food that was served to me during my meal. You just recently ate at a restaurant, and you were dissatisfied with the food. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: • Introduce yourself • State what you did not like about the food • Say what action you wish for the management to take As a regular customer, I have always loved your clam chowder, which led me to order a bowl of it when I had dinner at your establishment two days ago. I expected it to be rich and flavorful but what was served was too watery and did not have that much flavor. It was also very cold and unappetizing. Apart from this, the T-bone steak I ordered was too tough that it almost had a rubbery texture. It was definitely overdone as there were burnt edges, resulting in it being too dry and bland. The dessert was also a nightmare as the crème brulee I was served was too mushy and rather sweet for my liking. Because of these circumstances, I would like to request for a full refund for the price I paid for the meal. In addition, I highly suggest that you re-train your chefs and kitchen staff to improve the quality of the food you offer. It would also be greatly beneficial if you check the food you are about to serve to customers before doing so to avoid a similar incident in the future. Should you wish to discuss this matter with me personally, please feel free to call me at 0999 999999. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Brian Martin Sioson
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am one of your customers who had dinner at your restaurant a couple of nights ago. I am

writing to complain about the quality of the
food
that
was served
to me during my meal.

You
just
recently ate at a restaurant, and you
were dissatisfied
with the
food
. Write a letter to

the manager. In your letter:

• Introduce yourself

• State what you did not like about the
food •
Say what action you wish for the management to take

As a regular customer, I have always
loved
your clam chowder, which led me to order a bowl of

it when I had dinner at your establishment two days ago. I
expected
it to be rich and flavorful

but
what
was served
was too watery and did not have that much flavor. It was
also
very
cold


and unappetizing. Apart from this, the T-bone steak I ordered was too tough that it almost had

a rubbery texture. It was definitely overdone as there
were burnt
edges, resulting in it being

too dry and bland. The dessert was
also
a nightmare as the crème
brulee
I
was served
was too

mushy and
rather
sweet for my liking.

Because
of these circumstances, I would like to request for a full refund for the price I paid for

the meal.
In addition
, I
highly
suggest that you re-train your chefs and kitchen staff to
improve


the quality of the
food
you offer. It would
also
be
greatly
beneficial if you
check
the
food
you

are about to serve to customers
before
doing
so
to avoid a similar incident in the future.

Should you wish to discuss this matter with me
personally
,
please
feel free to call me at 0999

999999. I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Brian Martin
Sioson
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IELTS letter You just recently ate at a restaurant, and you were dissatisfied with the food. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: • Introduce yourself • State what you did not like about the food • Say what action you wish for the management to take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
307 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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