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You have just missed a friend‘s party.

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Dear my friend. I am writing this letter to apologize for not attending the birthday party which has been accomplished by close friend of mine last weekend. I had a lot to do with my own businesses which will not able to be put them in any way, so that we have to fullfill all of them. To begin with my personal issues, since we live in the rural area, the agricultural products ought to be planted immediately in case of the weather and climate changes. All the feeder which needs culturing, after that they need watering in time for being ready to be consumed or to be delivered to the markets to supply civilian with food store. Moreover, I have been ill for a while, which is so intense, therefore, I have been hospital for a week. I regret missing the crucial day for you. Although I have been in worse condition and depressed I wanted to participate at the party. Please, accept my apologies again once. Your sincerelyShohida Asadova
Dear my friend. I am writing this letter to apologize for not attending the birthday party which has
been accomplished
by close friend of mine last weekend. I had a lot to do with my
own
businesses which will not able to
be put
them in any way,
so
that we
have to
fullfill
all of them. To
begin
with my personal issues, since we
live
in the rural area, the agricultural products ought to
be planted
immediately in case of the weather and climate
changes
. All the feeder which needs culturing, after that they need watering in time for being ready to
be consumed
or to
be delivered
to the markets to supply civilian with food store.
Moreover
, I have been ill for a while, which is
so
intense,
therefore
, I have been hospital for a week. I regret missing the crucial day for you. Although I have been in worse condition and depressed I wanted to participate at the party.
Please
, accept my apologies again once. Your
sincerelyShohida
Asadova
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IELTS letter You have just missed a friend‘s party.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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