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I am writing to apologize for not attending your birthday party.

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Dear Sarah. I am writing to apologize for not attending your birthday party. There was a little problem with my family, that's why I didn't go your party. We received a letter about would be destroyed our house. For this reason, we ought to move to new another place so I had no choice but to undertake this necessary work. I sincerely apologize for this and I hope I'll go your home at your son's birthday with my children and we will celebrate his party together. I believe that you will understand my situation and sorry me. Keep in touch, Yours Joseph.
Dear Sarah. I am writing to apologize for not attending your birthday party. There was a
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little
problem with my family, that's why I didn't go your party. We received a letter about would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
destroyed
our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.
For this reason
, we ought to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
to new another place
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so
I had no choice
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but
to undertake this necessary work. I
sincerely
apologize for this and I hope I'll go your home at your son's birthday with my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
children and
we will celebrate his party together. I believe that you will understand my situation and sorry me.
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Keep
in touch, Yours Joseph.
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IELTS letter I am writing to apologize for not attending your birthday party.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
102 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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