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You just moved to a new city for work. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter, Tell your friend about your work. Describe your new city. Invite your friend to visit you.

You just moved to a new city for work. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter, Tell your friend about your work. Describe your new city. Invite your friend to visit you. do13d
Dear Juliette, How are you doing these days? I wanted to update you on my life here in Vancouver now that I am settled. I moved to Vancouver for work last month. A small but promising company working on artificial intelligence offered me a position as a project manager. My work consists of making sure that the different engineering teams are working towards the same goal. I currently oversee two major projects. Vancouver is a stunning city. I get to see the sun rise over a beautiful mountain range and gently set on the ocean. The mild climate allows me to commute to work on my bicycle. There is also a bustling art scene that I think you would enjoy! I would love to see you and take you around Vancouver sometime. I set up my study so that I can host a guest. You mentioned that you would like to go kayaking. July and August would be a perfect time to go kayaking along the fjords. Let me know when you would like to visit! Please keep in touch and let me know how you are doing these days. I can’t wait to see you again! Best, Fujiko Kine
Dear Juliette,

How are you doing these days? I wanted to update you on my life here in Vancouver
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to Vancouver for work last month. A
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company
working on artificial intelligence offered me a position as a project manager. My work consists of making sure that the
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different
engineering teams are working towards the same goal. I
currently
oversee two major projects.

Vancouver is a stunning city. I
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get
to
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see
the sun rise over a
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beautiful
mountain range and
gently
set on the ocean. The mild climate
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allows
me to commute to work on my bicycle. There is
also
a bustling art scene that I
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think
you would enjoy!

I would
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love
to
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see
you and take you around Vancouver sometime. I set up my study
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so
that I can host a guest. You mentioned that you would like to go kayaking. July and August would be a perfect time to go kayaking along the fjords.

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Let
me know when you would like to visit!
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Please
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keep
in touch and
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let
me know how you are doing these days. I can’t wait to
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see
you again!

Best,

Fujiko Kine
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IELTS letter You just moved to a new city for work. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter, Tell your friend about your work. Describe your new city. Invite your friend to visit you.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
199 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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