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My daily activities and about my selt and my personality

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Hellow I am. Omar Faruk Rakib. I am a student of class 12. I read in sabujbagh Govt. College. I passed my SSC examination with GPA5 from Kadamtala Purba Basabo School & College. I like to play Cricket, Football and ride with my cycle in my free time. I have a big Dream to be an officer of Bangladesh Air Force. May Allah accept me and fulfill my desire. Now am sitting on the chair and scrolling social media. Then i will go to bath. Then I will complete duhr prayer In Shaa Allah.
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Hellow
I am. Omar
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Faruk
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Rakib
. I am a student of
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class
12. I read in
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sabujbagh
Govt. College.
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I
passed my SSC examination with GPA5 from
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Kadamtala
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Purba
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Basabo
School & College.
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I
like to play Cricket, Football and ride with my cycle in my free time.
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I
have a
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big
Dream to be an officer of Bangladesh Air Force. May Allah accept me and fulfill my desire.
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Now
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am
sitting on the chair and scrolling social media. Then
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i
will go
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to bath
. Then I will complete
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duhr
prayer In
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Shaa
Allah.

IELTS letter My daily activities and about my selt and my personality

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
94 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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