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Letter is about formal complain letter, in this letter complain is written about fridge.

Letter is about formal complain letter, in this letter complain is written about fridge. DlA3E

Dear Sir or MadamI am writing to complain about fridge which l have recently bought it from your shop for my wife's birthday. After only two days it started to go wrong. On the 16th of September l and my wife visited to one of the most your famous shops for new equipment and began to chose for our kitchen. While looking around the market l encountered it and it's modern design attracted me as well as her too. Then we asked all information about this product from your shop assistant. After getting all information we decided to purchase it. Two days later my wife said that there was some problem with the item. On the first day we turned on it with main instruction of your technic. It had worked properly. Our all snacks, food, drinks and other product were saved as fresh but after one day ago issue happened with it's working system. During she was putting fruits and vegetables, suddenly it both sounded a strange voice and it shakes extraordinarily. This furniture has not been working well for that event happened. As well as our meals and snacks lost their quality. Furthermore, when she tried putting another the same thing happened. In addition to this, the fridge's light did not turn on. I would like you to replace the fridge with well- functioning one. I expect to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise, unfortunately l will be forced to report this Customer Service Association responsible for this matter. I look forward to receiving reply. Yours faithfully Albert Tolbin. ,

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 writing to complain about fridge which l have recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 it from your shop for my wife's birthday. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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only
 two days it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
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wrong
. On the 16th of September l and my wife visited to one of the most your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 shops for new equipment and began to chose for our kitchen. While looking around the market l encountered it and Did you mean "its modern design"?its modern design
it's modern design
 attracted me as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrongtogether
well
 as her too. Then we asked all information about this product from your shop assistant. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 getting all information we decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it. Two days later my wife said that there was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 problem with the item. On the first
 day we turned on it with main instruction of your Possible spelling mistake found.ethnictechnicalmechanictechnotectonicechoic
technic
. It had worked properly
. Our all snacks, food, drinks and other product were saved
 as fresh This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 after one day ago issue happened The verb 'happen' usually requires the preposition "to".to
with
 it's working system. During she was putting fruits and vegetables, suddenly
 it both sounded a strange voice and it shakes extraordinarily
. This furniture has not been working You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrongtogether
well
 for that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 happened. As You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrongtogether
well
 as our meals and snacks lost their quality. Furthermore
, when she tried putting another the same thing happened. In addition
 to this, the fridge's light did not turn on. I would like you to replace the fridge with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrongtogether
well-
 functioning one. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise
, unfortunately l will be forced
 to report this Customer Service Association responsible for this matter. I look forward to receiving reply. Yours faithfully
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