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Formal giving advice letter about taking care for baby problem.

Formal giving advice letter about taking care for baby problem. AjEmL
Dear Mrs Rossetti. I am writing in reply to your asking letter for advice about taking care for baby problem. l would give a number of my aid to you. At my beginning sentence l am going to congratulate with mother luck both l wish all the best desires to you in the world and your baby has been given to you with strong health and a long life by my God. My recommendation to you is that always look after to your kid as looking to angel. You should never speak with very high loudly voice, again do not look with angry face to its eye. In addition to this l can suggest a plenty of following suggest. The most essential way of caring for young child is his eating food ration. I must admit that it is very important for good developing at the first position. As well as you ought to attent his clothes and sleeping time. When you are buying tiny dresses for new born child, please be careful to they are made of cotton, also their clothes must be soft and clean. I hope that my support will be useful to you and your child. If you have a trouble may write and inquire again. I assist to you by heart. Yours sincerely Alice Jordan.
Dear Mrs Rossetti. I am writing in reply to your asking letter for advice about taking care for baby problem.
l
would give a number of my aid to you. At my beginning sentence l
am
going to congratulate with mother luck both l wish all the best desires to you in the world and your baby has been
given
to you with strong health and a long life by my God. My recommendation to you is that always look after to your kid as looking to angel. You should never speak with
very
high
loudly
voice, again do not look with angry face to its eye.
In addition
to this l can suggest a
plenty
of following suggest. The most essential way of caring for young child is his eating food ration. I
must
admit that it is
very
important
for
good
developing at the
first
position.
As well
as you ought to
attent
his clothes and sleeping time. When you are buying tiny dresses for new born child,
please
be careful to they
are made
of cotton,
also
their clothes
must
be soft and clean. I hope that my support will be useful to you and your child. If you have a trouble may write and inquire again. I assist to you by heart. Yours
sincerely
Alice Jordan.
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IELTS letter Formal giving advice letter about taking care for baby problem.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
220 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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