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The english department has decided to hold a speech contest in late December but your classmate find that it is too near the final examination. Write to the Dean of the department to suggest a change of the time

The english department has decided to hold a speech contest in late December but your classmate find that it is too near the final examination. Write to the Dean of the department to suggest a change of the time MMKDp
Dear Sir or Madam I would like to suggest you bartering of the speech contest time. Nowadays we are students of Class 94-1 at the University where is located near the authority. We are glad that the department is to hold an English speech rivaly. Also we are sure, it is of great assist to our verbal English and all of us intend to participate it. We have found out that the period of the contest is on 28th of December and what riddles us is the time of the compatetion. As you know, according to the school schedule of this term, the last examination is to begin on 12th January. We all desire to do excellently in both, however, we are afraid of it will be heavy for all students to prepare for the exam and although the contest at the similar time. As a result of, we would contribute to less time on the preparation contest. Considering the outcome of the contest, we recommend so because, generally speaking, we will have more lesuire time in that period of time. Thanks for your attention. Your faithfully.
Dear Sir or Madam

I would like to suggest you bartering of the speech
contest
time
. Nowadays we are students of
Class
94-1 at the University where
is located
near the authority. We are glad that the department is to hold an English speech
rivaly
.
Also
we are sure, it is of great assist to our verbal English and all of us intend to participate it.

We have found out that the period of the
contest
is on 28th of December and what riddles us is the
time
of the
compatetion
. As you know, according to the school schedule of this term, the last examination is to
begin
on 12th January. We all desire to do
excellently
in both,
however
, we are afraid of it will be heavy for all students to prepare for the exam and although the
contest
at the similar
time
.
As a result
of, we would contribute to less
time
on the preparation contest.

Considering the outcome of the
contest
, we recommend
so
because
,
generally
speaking, we will have more
lesuire
time
in that period of time.

Thanks for your attention.

Your
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter The english department has decided to hold a speech contest in late December but your classmate find that it is too near the final examination. Write to the Dean of the department to suggest a change of the time

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