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You joined as a new student in the college and something is missing from information pack write a letter to the college administration mention what was missing in the pack the difficulty you faced due to missing item what could be done to improve situation

You joined as a new student in the college and something is missing from information pack write a letter to the college administration mention what was missing in the pack the difficulty you faced due to missing item what could be done to improve situation DN236

Dear sir, I hope you are fine. I am writing a letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding address and location missing from information pack. Firstly, I am a nepali citizen. However, lastweek I had joined your university when I was on the way to college I notice area and telephone number has missing. In addition, in most of places people didnt know about the university location. Also, when I tried to search but due to low internet speed of my phone I found difficulty. Likewise, Due to 2hours investigation at last a old kan give location of university. As a result, I would like to request you nowadays most of people are from far place and individuals are searching location and contact number from social media. Whereas, please setup or put right address as soon as possible. I look forward to your quick reply. Yours faithfully, Alash sanjel

Dear sir, I hope you are fine. I am writing a letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding address and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhooddistrictarealocalevenueregion
location
 missing from information pack. Firstly
, I am a Possible spelling mistake found.NepaliNepalNepalis
nepali
 citizen. However
, Possible spelling mistake found.last week
lastweek
 I had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
joined
 your university when I was on the way to college I notice area and telephone number has missing. In addition
, in After 'most of', you should use 'the' ("most of the places") or simply say "most places".most of the placesmost places
most of places
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
Possible spelling mistake founddidn't
didnt
 know about the university You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhooddistrictarealocalevenueregion
location
. Also
, when I tried to search This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 due to low internet speed of my phone I found difficulty. Likewise
, Due to 2hours investigation at last Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
Possible spelling mistake found.KanancanmanSanran
kan
 give You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhooddistrictarealocalevenueregion
location
 of university. As a result
, I would like to request you nowadays most of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are from far place and individuals are searching You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhooddistrictarealocalevenueregion
location
 and contact number from social media. Whereas, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 setup or put right address as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. I look forward to your quick reply. Yours faithfully
, Possible spelling mistake found.FlashClashSlashAlasAwashLash
Alash
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsanjel.sanjel!sanjel?sanjel:sanjel,sanjel;
sanjel