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You invited a guest speaker to your village hall to talk about environmental change. Many people attended the talk and enjoyed it very much. Write a letter to the guest speaker thanking him/her. In your letter • Say how much you appreciate them coming. • Tell them the reaction from the people who attended. • Suggest another talk in the future.

You invited a guest speaker to your village hall to talk about environmental change. Many people attended the talk and enjoyed it very much. Write a letter to the guest speaker thanking him/her. In your letter • Say how much you appreciate them coming. • Tell them the reaction from the people who attended. • Suggest another talk in the future. nNW3K
Dear Mr. Zeeshan, I am writing this letter to thank you for a wonderful speech. Firstly, I want to tell you that you have set an incredible record as being the first guest speaker ever in the history of this village. We learned a myriad of techniques that can help in making the environment pollution free such as planting trees to reduce global warming. Secondly, the local people were really impressed by your dedication to work. According to them they acquired a wealth of knowledge like the number of ways taught by you to improve our surrounding. They literally did not know before that usage of private vehicles, mass destruction equipment and plastic consumption are the major factors affecting the earth. Moreover, I had never seen such unity among them on any rural issue but on this speech, they all have a similar point of view. They all wanted to implement clean environment strategies as soon as possible. Thirdly, now they are insisting me to call you again. At this time, they wanted to learn methods to save resources. For example, how efficiently they can utilize water, electricity and gas etc. By doing this they hope there would be a marginal reduction in their daily or monthly expenditures. I look forward to receiving a positive response. Yours Sincerely, Arsalan
Dear Mr.
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Zeeshan
,

I am writing this letter to thank you for a wonderful speech.

Firstly
, I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you that you have set an incredible record as being the
first
guest speaker ever in the history of this village. We learned a myriad of techniques that can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in making the environment pollution free such as planting trees to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
global warming.

Secondly
, the local
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
were
really
impressed by your dedication to work. According to them they acquired a wealth of knowledge like the number of ways taught by you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
our surrounding. They
literally
did not know
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
that usage of private vehicles, mass destruction equipment and plastic consumption are the major factors affecting the earth.
Moreover
, I had never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
such unity among them on any rural issue
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
on this speech, they all have a similar point of view. They all wanted to implement clean environment strategies as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

Thirdly
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
they are insisting me to call you again. At this time, they wanted to learn methods to save resources.
For example
, how
efficiently
they can utilize water, electricity and gas etc. By doing this they hope there would be a marginal reduction in their daily or monthly expenditures.

I look forward to receiving a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Arsalan

IELTS letter You invited a guest speaker to your village hall to talk about environmental change. Many people attended the talk and enjoyed it very much. Write a letter to the guest speaker thanking him/her. In your letter • Say how much you appreciate them coming. • Tell them the reaction from the people who attended. • Suggest another talk in the future.

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