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Hope you are in the pink of your health. It's been a long we have seen each other. As I am writing this letter in response to your letter that I received last week.

Hope you are in the pink of your health. It's been a long we have seen each other. As I am writing this letter in response to your letter that I received last week. 5b1MD
Dear Rakesh, Hope you are in the pink of your health. It's been a long we have seen each other. As I am writing this letter in response to your letter that I recieved last week. As you asked me to accomodate your stay in my home, I wish, If I can do so. Actually, next month I have been planning a family trip to abroad for a month. So i will not be available, I really apologize for this. I had planned this trip from past month and I already booked the tickets. I hope you will understand my situation. On the contrary, I did some arrangements for your stay. I had informed to my cousin and asked him to provide you the accomaodation in his home. He agreed to it, and also will come to pick you from the airport. You can stay there as long as you wish. I will try to be in touch with you during your stay in india. Hope you will not be angry on me for my absense during your stay and will understand my situation. Hope to hear from you soon, Yours truly, Jagjit
Dear Rakesh,

Hope you are in the pink of your health. It's been a long we have
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seen
each other.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
I am writing this

letter in response to your letter that I
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recieved
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last week
.

As you asked me to
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accomodate
your
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stay
in my home, I wish, If I can do
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so
. Actually,
next
month I have been planning

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a
family trip to abroad for a month.
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So
Did you mean "I"?
i
will not be available, I
really
apologize for this. I had planned this
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trip


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from
past month and I already booked the tickets. I hope you will understand my situation.

On the contrary
, I did
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some
arrangements for your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stay
. I had informed to my cousin and asked him to provide you the
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accomaodation
in his home.

He
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agreed
to it, and
also
will
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come
to pick you from the airport. You can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stay
there as long as you wish. I will try to be in touch with you during

your
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stay
in
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india
. Hope you will not be angry on me for my
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absense
during your
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stay
and will understand my situation.

Hope to hear from you
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soon
,

Yours
truly
,

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Jagjit

IELTS letter Hope you are in the pink of your health. It's been a long we have seen each other. As I am writing this letter in response to your letter that I received last week.

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
192 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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