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You have decided to spend some more time working this summer. You have an advertisement in the paper that young, experienced, qualified cadres are needed for lower classes in the school. There’s a test to see how you work a month firstly. Then you can continue your work. Write a letter asking about the salary paid and whether there are sufficient conditions for teaching.

You have decided to spend some more time working this summer. You have an advertisement in the paper that young, experienced, qualified cadres are needed for lower classes in the school. There’s a test to see how you work a month firstly. Then you can continue your work. Write a letter asking about the salary paid and whether there are sufficient conditions for teaching. XE9qg
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to apply for the position of English Education teacher at the school for lower classes which they need. I am 20 years old and I haven’t graduated a bachelor’s degree in Uzbekistan State World Languages University, where I received first class honours. I have completed of the lyceum which was belonged to Namangan State University. I have taken 7 point of degree from IELTS exam. Prior to this, I worked as a English master in the kindergarten which was located near our country during autumn season. I speak fluent English and Uzbek and some Russian. Is that job well paid? How much it approximately? Does your school’s condition is comfortable for teaching? Please, give these full information for me. I am friendly, organized and work well under pressure. I am patient and believe in encouraging all the pupils to reach their full potential. I enclose a copy of my CV and I would be glad to attend an interview at any time convenient to you. I am looking forward to receiving your response in the near future. Your’s faithfully, Zarnigor Ergasheva.
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of English Education teacher at the school for lower classes which they need.

I am 20 years
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and I haven’t graduated a bachelor’s degree in Uzbekistan State World Languages University, where I received
first
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honours
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I
have completed of the lyceum which
was belonged
to
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Namangan
State University.
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I
have taken 7 point of degree from IELTS exam. Prior to this, I worked as
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a
English master in the kindergarten which
was located
near our country during autumn season. I speak fluent English and Uzbek and
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some
Russian. Is that job well paid? How much it approximately? Does your school’s condition is comfortable for teaching?
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Please
, give these full information for me.

I am friendly, organized and work well under pressure. I am patient and believe in encouraging all the pupils to reach their full potential.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
enclose a copy of my CV and I would be glad to attend an interview at any time convenient to you.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am looking forward to receiving your response in the near future.

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Your’s
faithfully
,

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Zarnigor
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Ergasheva
.
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IELTS letter You have decided to spend some more time working this summer. You have an advertisement in the paper that young, experienced, qualified cadres are needed for lower classes in the school. There’s a test to see how you work a month firstly. Then you can continue your work. Write a letter asking about the salary paid and whether there are sufficient conditions for teaching.

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188 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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